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-ShesH Iccha-

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-shesh iccha-

bhalo tumi beshona amai
ei prem amar jonne noi
ami noi tomar shopner raj konna
bodle gechi ei ami
muchechi prochur chokher kanna

gaan geye jai dukher
ausru jole bhije gechi
ajo dekhini shukher mukh
mrittur age amar ektie prarthona
chuye jete chai ami shukher chaya
hashi fotate chai ei nishpran mukhe
shorate chai ei meghe dhaka sriti
tobuo,
bhalo tumi beshona amai...
Well...this is a bengali poem i wrote..i usually dont write bangla poemzz so thoes who can read this...dont laugh...and...gimme suggestions or wutever to improve this...and thoes of u who cant read this i apologize and u guys can comment on the pic if u want...any comments will be greatly appreciate it :)

P.S. the translation of the title is LAST WISH!
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I like this lol, even tho admittedly I cant read it, I had my friend who can read it to me, she didnt tell me what it meant tho :S lol, she said I should figure it out myself, but when I heard it, it sounds really kewl :D lol